Monday, January 14, 2008

The book sucks

So I'm reading through one of the most difficult passages in my book, a moment full of sexual tension and intrigue. Unfortunately, I read that my heroine remains

hoovering by the door.

Characters do take on a life of their own, but that's ridiculous. I'm trying to bring things to a head and she's worrying about the domestic chores.


Anonymous said...

Or perhaps she's snacking compulsively in response to stress.

Jess said...

Perhaps she should try hoovering in the bedroom instead. Badum tish!

It's good you're working with it. Happy writing. :)

Mary said...

well, at least if her life goes down the wotsits, she'll still get the deposit back on her flat for having kept it presentable.